I've been rewriting the intro to my prologue so many times that I'm stuck in between a rock on this. I wrote the whole prologue already, but I went back to edit and I didn't like the way I wrote the intro to my prologue. So I need opinions and advice on it.
Genre: Xianxia, Fantasy, Romance, Transmigration, Transported into Another World, Comedy, Drama, Friendship
Here's a small snippet I cut out from my intro:
"It was a cold morning on December 30th, 2018 in the city of Madison, Wisconsin. On a busy street downtown, a young Hmong American woman parked her silver Honda jeep across the street.
After parking it, she got out of it and headed towards the crosswalk at the corner of the street she parked her car.
The young woman wore a kaki raccoon and fur hoodie trimmed coat; along with dark blue skinny jeans; and black knee-high boots, making her appear sophisticated and casual.
She had long black hair and it was a bit puffy because of her mother's genetics on her maternal side of the family. Even though it was puffy, the young woman was proud of her hair. She tied her hair into a flower braid, allowing some of her remaining hair to flow down naturally to her hip.
Her makeup was also light and casual, showcasing her natural beauty. Her big expressive eyes were hidden behind black photochromic glasses and she had a small black mole under the corner of her right eye side."