Need help with my introduction of my prologue. Xianxia romance web-novel I'm writing for fun?

I've been rewriting the intro to my prologue so many times that I'm stuck in between a rock on this. I wrote the whole prologue already, but I went back to edit and I didn't like the way I wrote the intro to my prologue. So I need opinions and advice on it.

Genre: Xianxia, Fantasy, Romance, Transmigration, Transported into Another World, Comedy, Drama, Friendship

Here's a small snippet I cut out from my intro:
"It was a cold morning on December 30th, 2018 in the city of Madison, Wisconsin. On a busy street downtown, a young Hmong American woman parked her silver Honda jeep across the street.

After parking it, she got out of it and headed towards the crosswalk at the corner of the street she parked her car.

The young woman wore a kaki raccoon and fur hoodie trimmed coat; along with dark blue skinny jeans; and black knee-high boots, making her appear sophisticated and casual.

She had long black hair and it was a bit puffy because of her mother's genetics on her maternal side of the family. Even though it was puffy, the young woman was proud of her hair. She tied her hair into a flower braid, allowing some of her remaining hair to flow down naturally to her hip.

Her makeup was also light and casual, showcasing her natural beauty. Her big expressive eyes were hidden behind black photochromic glasses and she had a small black mole under the corner of her right eye side."

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Boring
You're a box checker, not a writer, you're cutting and pasting a meaningless description together.

"A Mongolian girl with cheekbones like honey-coated chisels was running him a cup."

That is a quote from a novel I was reading last month by William Gibson. A one sentence description which blew me away and the story kept flowing. I was torn between marveling at the beauty of it and continuing to read.

It reads like a list.
Does the reader need to know that her puffy hair comes from her mother's and her mother's mother's genes?
Does the reader need to know she has a mole?
She was wearing a hooded kaki coat trimmed with raccoon fur. (Raccoons are not kaki coloured.) This tells us that she is smartly, even expensively dressed. A real fur is not cheap. The skinny jeans imply "casual" wear. So you don't have to reinforce it by saying so afterward.
Honda does not make the Jeep. Fiat-Crysler does, in Ohio.
She parked the car (or Jeep) across the street from what? I suggest that you use a map of Madison and name the streets of the intersection she heads toward, and, if possible, the building she parked in front of or across from. You don't need to tell us that Madison is a city.